朵拉寫作課第一堂 / 共五堂
第一堂 · 工具箱 ①

換字升級
把「國中生英文」變「高分英文」

同一個意思,用 importan­t 還是 paramount?閱卷老師三秒就看出程度。這堂課把大考最高頻的 15 組「同義詞群」一次建好——它們是不管考什麼題目都用得到的螺絲釘。

這堂課你會學會

  • 看懂「為什麼換字=拿分」:用字精準多元,直接對應五級分的字彙維度
  • 記住 15 組大考最高頻同義詞群,每組從基礎字升級到進階字。
  • 能把一句「國中生寫法」即時改寫成「大考高分寫法」。
本堂教學流程(建議 90 分鐘)
  • 10 分暖身對照:投影下面「國中 vs 大考」兩句,問學生差在哪,帶出「換字」概念。
  • 35 分同義詞銀行:逐組講解,每組請學生先猜基礎字,再揭曉進階字+範文例句。重點放前 9 組功能詞(連接詞類),這些 CP 值最高。
  • 15 分範文挖空:全班一起把 104 學測開頭填回去(點空格翻牌對答案)。
  • 20 分小測:選擇題當堂舉手,句子升級寫在學習單上,抽 3 位上台。
  • 10 分收尾:指定回家把 15 組各造一句,下週小考抽 5 組。
  • 常見迷思要破:學生愛硬塞冷僻字導致用錯。強調「精準>華麗」——寧可用對的 essential,不要用錯的 quintessential。
先看一個對照

同樣的意思,兩種程度

國中生寫法

Respect is very important. Because of the internet, people don't respect each other. So we should improve it.

大考高分寫法(同樣三句,只換了字)

Respect is paramount. Owing to the booming of the internet, people seldom respect each other. Consequently, we should ameliorate the situation.

內容一模一樣,但第二句的字彙、連接詞讓閱卷老師立刻感覺「這孩子有底子」。這就是換字的威力。

核心 · 帶著走的工具箱

15 組大考最高頻同義詞群

⭐ 是最推薦先背的「主力字」。例句取自 104–110 大考範文,背字也順便看到它怎麼用在句子裡。

① 重要的、關鍵的 連接·形容
基礎字:important → 升級
essentialcrucialvitalsignificantprominentparamountcriticalindispensable
Respect and leadership are two of the most essential elements of becoming a whole person.(104 學測)
② 認為 動詞
基礎字:think → 升級
considerregardreckondeemholdmaintain
I reckon Ms. Strong's book contains abundant examples.(104 學測)
③ 因為 連接
基礎字:because → 升級(後接名詞)
due toowing tobecause ofon account ofby reason ofon the grounds of
Owing to the invention of social media, the distance between individuals has lessened.(104 學測)
④ 因此、所以 連接
基礎字:so → 升級
thereforethusconsequentlyhenceaccordinglyas a resultas a consequence
Consequently, master programs have become a recommended choice for students.(105 指考)
⑤ 儘管如此、然而 連接
基礎字:but → 升級(句首轉折)
HoweverNeverthelessNonethelessNotwithstandingEven soYet
Nevertheless, this concept isn't necessarily right in modern times.(105 學測)
⑥ 為了 連接
基礎字:to + V → 升級
in order toso as towith the aim ofwith a view towith an eye tofor the sake offor the purpose of
In order to comfort my mom, my dad took us to a park.(106 學測)
⑦ 換句話說 連接
基礎字:that means → 升級
In other wordsThat is to sayNamelyTo put it another wayTo put it differently
In other words, I get more familiar with the knowledge I obtained in class.(104 指考)
⑧ 導致、造成 動詞片語
基礎字:cause → 升級
lead toresult ingive rise tobring aboutcontribute to
Consequences of cyberbullying may lead to real-world bullying.(104 學測)
⑨ 總結來說 連接
基礎字:in the end → 升級(結論段開頭)
To sum upIn conclusionTo concludeAll in allIn sumTo summarize
All in all, when deciding to stay in a long line, try not to blindly follow the trend.(107 學測)
⑩ 大量的、豐富的 形容
基礎字:a lot of / many → 升級
abundantnumerousplentifulcopiousa plethora ofa wealth ofplenty of
Students absorb abundant knowledge in school.(109 指考)
⑪ 獲得、習得 動詞
基礎字:get → 升級
obtainacquiregainlearn
…broader knowledge acquired from school.(105 指考)
⑫ 各種的、不同的 形容
基礎字:many kinds of → 升級
variousdiversedifferentdistinctvaried
…the coordinator of various activities or clubs.(105 指考)
⑬ 增強、強化 動詞
基礎字:make stronger → 升級
enhancestrengthenintensifyreinforceboostconsolidate
It enhances our opportunity to interact with others.(104 學測)
⑭ 例如、舉例來說 連接
基礎字:like → 升級
for instancefor examplea case in point istake … for example
Take my family for example, my mother has an interest in cooking.(105 學測)
⑮ 除此之外 連接
基礎字:also / and → 升級
MoreoverFurthermoreBesidesAdditionallyOn top of that
On top of that, they also pay high attention to social issues.(108 指考)
看它怎麼用

範文挖空:104 學測開頭

點任一個 紅色空格 看答案——這是同一段範文,把剛剛的同義詞群挖掉了。先想想填什麼,再翻牌。

Respect and leadership, two of the most essential elements of becoming a whole person, are introduced to the reading assignment this summer break. I reckon Ms. Strong's book contains abundant examples worth contemplating. Owing to the invention of social media, the distance between individuals has been dramatically lessened. Positively, it enhances our opportunity to interact with others. Consequently, these activities frequently turn into cyberbullying, which may lead to real-world tragedies.
尊重與領導,是成為一個全方位的人最重要的兩個要素…由於社群媒體的發明,人與人的距離大幅縮短。正面來看,它強化了我們與他人互動的機會。因此,這些活動經常演變成網路霸凌,可能導致真實世界的悲劇。
當堂小測

換你升級

1so(因此)」的大考升級字,下列哪個不對
Consequently Therefore Nevertheless(這是「然而」,不是「因此」) Hence
2要表達「因為+名詞」,最道地的選項是?
Because the rain(文法不完整) Owing to the rain So as to the rain In other words the rain
3句子升級|把這句的劃線字換成大考用字(可不只一種答案):

"There are a lot of reasons, and they are very important."

參考:"There are numerous / abundant reasons, and they are paramount / essential."(換掉 a lot of → numerous;important → paramount)
4句子升級|整句改寫,盡量用上 3 個以上本課同義詞群:

"Because of the internet, we can get many things. But it also causes some problems. So we should be careful."

"Owing to the internet, we can acquire numerous things. Nevertheless, it also gives rise to some problems. Consequently, we should be cautious."(因為→Owing to、得到→acquire、許多→numerous、但→Nevertheless、造成→gives rise to、所以→Consequently)

📌 回家作業

從 15 組同義詞群裡,各挑一個進階字造一個句子(共 15 句)。下堂課抽 5 組小考。把句子寫在下面,會自動存檔:

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